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Black and white lightning
But not a cloud in the sky?
Ah, rain in Parma.
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Del Piero fakes...
Feeds the ball to Inzaghi...
9 taps it home...GOOOOOOAAAAAALLL!

:)

[This message has been edited by DM-11 (edited 04-05-2000).]
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Zen9 had a dream, a very beautiful dream! :)

UNFORTUNATELY, it will NEVER EVER come true! (Not too sure about that... ;))

WATCH OUT, WE'RE STILL BEHIND YOU, WAITING FOR YOU TO DROP POINTS AGAIN!

"A ROMA SOLO LA LAZIO!"

Lazia
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Lazia can count
To five and then to seven -
Not to five again?

:) :)
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Pippo gets the ball
Dives with no-one around him
You call him a star?
:)

FORZA LAZIO!
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after Pippo dives a penalty is called and it is a goooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaal...Juve have won the 26th Scudetto :) :) :)
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Long shot from Van der sar...

Davids takes it, feeds it to Conte...

conte to Zidane...

Beautiful pass from Zizou to Del Piero!!!

Del Piero... DEL PIERO!!!!!


GOOOAAAAAAAALLLLLLLLLLLLL FROM OPEN PLAY!!!!!!!

almost an year, should be time!! :) :)

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G3ORG3

FoRzA JuVe

fOrZa BiAnCoNeRi
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We've moved away from haiku to play-by-play announcing.

A haiku is a three line poem: the first line has five syllables (no more, no less); the second line has seven syllables; the third line has five syllables.

There are some other rules and conventions, but the 5 - 7 - 5 format is enough for our purposes.

For example, I could change Lazia's post and make it into a haiku:

Zen9 had a dream.
A very beautiful dream.
Unfortunately ....

See? 5 - 7 - 5

Have fun!

Zen9
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Ah, I see we have poet in our forum! Great! :) Zen9 you should start making Juventus poems!
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not bad zen i learnt something....... ok well i hope i can learn on sunday that juve have won 26th scudetto it will be fantastic but i mean this is where the pressure comes ne way ill give a go at haiku.

Please juve win
You are the team i keep on dream
so win against parma.

ok proberly it may not work anyway sometimes u gotta bend rules when things dont go ure way!!
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That's very close, Forza Italianos. Good work.

Here's one in your honor:

Please hurry, Sunday.
Forza Italianos
Dreams in black and white.

Regards,

Zen9
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Thanks zen u are really good its just a time 4 juve to be just as good
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Title for Sporting,
Championship in the mist,
Oh winning is sweet

I thought I'd join in since my beloved Lions are about to win for the first time in 18 years. Goodluck and I hope Juve leaves Lazio in the dust.

Viva Sporting!!!
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Since I won't be able to post again until Monday, I will leave you with one more
( don't laugh at my Italian :) )


Si, crediamo,
Ora e per sempre piu:
Bianconeri.

[This message has been edited by Zen9 (edited 06-05-2000).]
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Thuram,Bolano
Amoroso,Vanoli
Crespo,GO-O-AL!

(it follows the rules,5-7-5 :))

FORZA PARMA!

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The sun will rise again...and it will be...GIALLOBLU!
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Alessio approaches for
A thirty yard power-drive
Buffon off his line.
GOAL!

5-7-5-1 :)

Forza Juve!
[Forza Bologna]
[Forza Reggina] :)
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