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My Crazy Poem 3.

Posted July 30th, 2011 at 13:46 by
Updated August 31st, 2011 at 08:17 by HOMESMOINA!

-The voice of Devil

Call me thief
Or call me rogue.
What have I done?
Is a Caper.

Its not an egotrip,
But its was just a gag
Deceiving people,
Sly guy me.
I love to do something diabolical,
B'cause I'm a Devil.

My dialect is rough,
My strategy is tough.
I know how to fool,
Nay, I'm not too cool.
When angry I'm
I can kill But
I'm Remorseful.

May God be my rival
He made me,I will keep him busy.
Cause this will make him happy,
May I be bad.
But I'm his creation for testing his child,
So I can't win him,
Oh Great Father! Our God!
I'm wrong,
I'm Sory but I will keep fighting.
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    Ronaldwho?'s Avatar
    That was a great post
    Posted October 24th, 2011 at 23:52 by Ronaldwho? Ronaldwho? is offline
    Updated November 3rd, 2011 at 12:59 by HOMESMOINA! (Wanna see how moderation feels.)
    Firdaus's Avatar
    This is my favourite poem. Hope to see more in the future!
    Posted October 24th, 2011 at 23:55 by Firdaus Firdaus is offline
    Los Che Forever's Avatar
    Wow, loving these homey.
    Posted October 24th, 2011 at 23:55 by Los Che Forever Los Che Forever is offline
    JD's Avatar
    I didn't know you had so many layers Homes; such depth.

    You're like an Onion. A beautiful Indian Onion.
    Posted October 24th, 2011 at 23:55 by JD JD is offline
    Updated November 6th, 2011 at 12:28 by HOMESMOINA!
    Embad's Avatar
    Indian foods with onion, onion bhaji.
    Posted October 25th, 2011 at 00:00 by Embad Embad is offline
    HOMESMOINA!'s Avatar
    Embad Onion Bhaji sucks. I like Alu Bhaji (Potato).
    Posted October 31st, 2011 at 16:40 by HOMESMOINA! HOMESMOINA! is offline
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