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post #1 of 10 (permalink) Old May 24th, 2012, 08:12 Thread Starter
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I wrote a new story

Actually I'm dissatisfied with it now as I gave a stereotypical representation of a sex worker.

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post #2 of 10 (permalink) Old May 24th, 2012, 13:27
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Very good story.
Out of curiosity(sp) Jeff which movie was that were that gay guy danced whole night with CSW?

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It is called "Dorian Blues":

http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0398963/

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Btw where the **** is MarieL? As it is mentioned in your Sig? Or was it a bait to attract people in reading it? Or the story is yet to finish?

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Btw where the **** is MarieL? As it is mentioned in your Sig? Or was it a bait to attract people in reading it? Or the story is yet to finish?
Yeah it's a really stupid piece of bait. I've used her so often it's probably a turn off more than anything. lol I thought people may be more inclined to read it if that was the heading text, rather than 'new story' or whatever.

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Better would have been "a heart breaking saga of homosexual love between Bill and Homes[ inside a mind bogglingly epic bisexual threesome session with a whore]"

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Maybe. Though I think some members are tired of me using xters in my stories.

Thanks for taking the time to read the story and to comment, Homes.

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why the hell did you edited the OP?

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Jeff,

I have read your story in the train Very nice story, which picks up nicely towards the second third. Sometimes it was confusing when you referred to yourself as "he", but overall an interesting subject with many important subjects. This could be expanded more and polished more.

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Can I have a copy of this story? I'm interested in reading it.
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