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post #1 of 7 (permalink) Old August 9th, 2006, 23:25 Thread Starter
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Can I????

Ok here goes...

I`m a 16 year old lad who loves to write, I put all my heart into my previous stories, and I have been told im a pretty good author by a few people...:smileani:

I am thinking of starting a new story, But was wandering if i may share it with you lot here in Bonita`s bookshop?
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Can you? Of course! And please do, yorkshirelad11

I'd love to read your stories. Perhaps you can begin by posting excerpts?

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Well I have not started it yet, So I can`t really do a any excerpts yet

I was thinking of posting the story afew paragraphs at a time if that would be ok?

BTW

The readers can help me with some input if they would like...

I am still undecided about the theme of my new story...

What would you most like to read on here?

A Football hooligan story? (simalar to my: "whos a nutter" in the fm story section)

A lost at sea, mountain or forrest story?

Or a medevil castle like story?

Your suggestions would be much appreciated
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It is not what we would like to read, it is more important that you the author determines what creativity is.

For starters, how about, hm, a character who believes in animes and a, hm, muffin revolution?

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Ok, Heres the starting few paragraphs....

Just a little for you to look forword to, i will not be able to post more as i go away tonight, but now u know what to look forword to,

please leave any opinions, and/or comments for the story on this board
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For starters, how about, hm, a character who believes in animes and a, hm, muffin revolution?
What ? Have Lewis Carroll writen a third adventure of Alice and you keep the only original hidden and there is such characters ?

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yorkshirelad11:

Thanks for posting the beginning of your story. I hope that, in time, we will learn more about each member of the family depicted in your work -- their aims (or lack of); their relationships to each other (or lack of). Oh and yes, contrary to football, don't be afraid to slow down your pace.

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